I tried to gramatically edit my posts (1, 1.5, 2, 3, 4) for the better. The story doesn’t change at all, but i myself feel, that it was better and smoother after i re-read it again. Please take a look when you have time. I will post chapter 5 later this day too.
PS: For another writer like me, or editor, try checking this, it helps a lot 🙂